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Amun-Ra - Group: Member - Total Posts: 21
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Posted on: 11/15/09 06:23PM

I've got it now. I've decided to go with Hentai-Foundry even though I don't like the people who run it. Here's a link.

www.hentai-foundry.com/story-3086.html



EricFong - Group: Member - Total Posts: 453
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Posted on: 11/16/09 02:34AM

Hey, i like your story, some part of it make me laugh, and cumming part made me have a boner lol.XD

Chapter three:On The Way, third and final part.

"What? You told me that poison just to used to knock out person? Not kill?"I surprised"Yeah... i am sorry..."

Damn, after wasted a shot of antidote, i sigh on Lisa.

*thunder sound*

"Whoa, day is getting darker and it gonna rain, i will set up a camp in the forest and rest until the day is bright again."I take my camping equipment"What about me?"Lisa asked"You? Think for yourself, my camp just have enough space for one person.""Well, i will stay under the tree...""Good for you."

*Rain drop*

"Okay, good night."I enter camp and start check my mp5 status, i pull out the mag and check how many bullet it left,*click**click**click*"14 bullet left." i put the bullets back inside the mag and load it into the gun. After that, i sleep.

When i was sleeping, i feel something wet and stick is all over my body... Wait, my body? I quickly awake, find out myself has been cover by blue color female shape slime(blue slime)i try to move, but only able to move outside the camp, then get my body sealed and unable to move again.

"Argh... must... get... my... grenade..."i failed to reach the grenade on my belt, and the slime slip inside my plan(fuck, i forgot what we wear on leg call) and cover my dick.

"Ah! What the fuck? Where are you touching?"I screamed"I need your semen."slime replied.

"Oh shit, i will get raped. Lisa! where are you? Help!"i call out for Lisa to help"Wha-What? A slime?"Lisa pull out her sword as soon as she see me and the slime.

The slime is jerking(or fucking?) my damned dick inside my plan, i holding it not to cum as hard as possible.

"Whoa whoa whoa, Lisa, put you sword down and do you see a ball look alike stuff on my belt?""Yeah, why?"

"Listen to my step carefully or we both die, first take it from my belt, hold it tightly then pull the ring on it and drop it on behind me, as my back is cover fully by slime. After that, run away as far as possible then hide behind the tree, got it?"

"But i don't understand why i have to do it."Lisa confused"Just do it now!"

Lisa do what i say and run a far, as the nade will donated in 5 second, is either try or raped in rest of my life.

*boom*

I have been thrown at least 6 meter away for in range of blowing grenade, i was wounded badly, but at least slime cover on my back is decrease the force of grenade. I can barely stand up, walk to my camp and take out a shot of morphine and inject it into my body by neck. Morphine held the pain, i was able to carry at my equipment and run away before the slime cover it self.

"Lisa..." i look back for the last time and continues running for 1 hour because of effect of morphine.

I run to the graveyard and the effect of the morphine pass away, i feel great pain and tired hitting my restless body. I sit down beside the grave, taking a first aid pack out of my bag, and cover bandage on my wounded skin.

"eh.....mo..." What is that? I hear someone moaning, i stand up and go to where the moaning came from.

"Oh bloody hell, i saw them in the movie... zombies!" I take out my mp5, shooting every zombie in the head, one bullet at a time, but since there will be no another way to stop them animate. I spend last 14 bullet in mag on 14 zombie, but there is too many of them, i fall back and notice something. An old American rifle m1 guard is stabbed on the floor and a rusty helmet used in world war 2 is on top on the rifle, this is meaning of "Fallen Soldier".

I snapped, and known even gun won't kill them. I pose a "salute" on it and leave the graveyard as soon as i done with it.

But there is"Fallen Soldier" which mean there is someone from American is living on this place.

The rain is stop, i continues down on my way to city with Lisa, i feel kind of lonely. Dawn is arrive, and i final reach the city...

Chapter three, part three end.



Thref - Group: Member - Total Posts: 302
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Multi post, part 3
Posted on: 11/16/09 04:51AM




To Eric on Chap 3 part1:

Your Not a Fan of MS? I'd imagine it would be an interest to you seeing as how you appear to like guns and merc scenarios. Well, Most people don't like it cause it's too difficult for them to play; they die before they can reach the first boss and just give up there on the spot, most last about 3 minutes and feel jypt cause they didn't even get to enjoy the game. Even though you have infinite ammo in the game, the bosses take like over a thousand hits to take down and the special weapons never last long enough except for the assault vehicles themselves.

O.K., So instead of a stargate scenario it's more like a Jurassic Park OR Land of the Lost Scenario OR Journey to the Center of the Earth, in your case.

I always write My long scripts to Text Files and Save them Locally; I never really just type long posts in Firefox anymore due to connection loss and stuff like that.
Most users don't bother with it, but let me tell you, it Saves you Heart(Head) ache IF sht Ever Happens net/site wise.
Practice Copy procedures before posting, You'll get used to it and never have to suffer what Most Users go through when they create unreproducible scripts that get lost in transfer permanently.

So You Geared up to go to some city and Lisa Fallows you. You get attacked by a Theif Bounty Hunter who wants your stuff. You fight him with your knife against his sword, ask Lisa To help you, she doesn't, then you just say, F it, and kick the guy in the Nads then capped em & stole HIS Stuff. You told Lisa that was the kind of Guy you are and that if she wanted, to stop fallowing you. She still refuses. Your Loot was, 23coins, a Sword, and a Bounty Hunters Hit list. You joke at the fact that Lisa's bounty only amounts to 700coins.


To Amun-Ra:


Amun-Ra Say:

Now, I love your creativity, but I was kinda looking for erotic stories. These monsters are rapists, remember? >_>

Gah, I'll go ahead and write an erotic story on another site and post a link here. I guess you guys aren't that much into femdom type stuff, but it's one of my things, so I'll go ahead with it.

I'll start with the Minotaur. She's a sexy one.


Eh, Are you addressing Me or someone else Thar :s?
Who Post your Story somewhere else? Just C & P here in this thread so as to avoid the trouble of going elsewhere that may be foreign to us.

Into Femdom? Depends on how hot and worthy the chick is to me ;).

I Prefer Night Mare Over Minotaur Myself, As you may have read.

Amun-Ra Say to Eric:

Your stories are kinda hard to follow.

I'm almost done with the story I'm writing, just seeing if one of my female friends wants to beta-read it.


Hold on, Amun-Ra, I'll post a Summery of Erics Work as soon as I get back -_-; Read my updates on page one.
As Stated Elsewhere, take your time, you aren't on a fixed schedule so no rush.

Amun-Ra Say to Eric:

Where are you from? It's obviously not your first language.

Also, about guns... I don't think this kind of thing takes place in our modern world. I don't think there's any guns, and if there are, they would be something like muskets, not pistols and machine guns.

It's like if somebody in Lord of the Rings started to slay the orcs with SMGs and SAWs. That just doesn't happen.

EDIT: So I just showed it to her. First thing she did was quote a part of the story and go "This... this... XD"
Since she finds this so humorous, which it shouldn't, I'm going to have to revise it.

Edit again: Done. I think it may suck a bit, but oh well.
www.furaffinity.net/view/3037612
I posted it on fur-affinity. Even though I don't deal with furries much, it seems like the site that would accept my story the best. I was thinking Hentai-Foundry, but I don't like the admins there.


That's a little rude to ask :s, luckily it seems Eric didn't seem offended by it.

It's His story, He can make up whatever he wants so long as it fallows the guidelines/rules and is relevantly coherent to an acceptable extent.
Perhaps, oh wait, I haven't gotten to posting that yet. . .

Humorous could be a good thing, I like Breaka's Work cause it is entertaining to read :).

That's nice, Why Not post it here? This site does allow you to edit your own posts after all.

You don't deal with teh furries much, but you have an account on what some people consider to be a furry based site?
Yeah, Some Admins Can be jerks or ignorant/negligent of their user base. . .

Amun-Ra Say:

Oh balls, I didn't know you had to sign in to...

Gah, now what... This is like 3 pages long in the word document I wrote, so I can't just post it here.


Gated sites are lame -_-. Seriously, you can post it here; Have you SEEN how much content I post 0_o.

Fine, -_-, I won't read it if it ain't posted here; out of principle.
If you want my feedback, then post in this thread. Otherwise, whatever.



To Eric on Rest of Chapter3:

Eric Tosses The List and meets up with two gargoyles in Statue Form, which means it must be daylight. Eric Asks why the gargoyles are erotically depicted and Lisa says that it's cause they are really mamono Girls that take men away and, then she blushes. A Hornet Mamono Girl flies past him, he rolls and he pulls out his sub machine gun as he wonders why a girl has wings, a stinger, and is carrying a spear. He warns the hornet to stop or he'll shoot. Hornet dives at him and stings Lisa as she gets in the way. Eric says she's not of any help and that he could have dodged it. Eric assumes soon after that lisa has been poisoned by the hornet sting. He takes aim at the hornet, couldn't bring himself to kill her so he gets a flash back and instead shoots out her wing. He taunts the hornet, they fight, he lands a spin punch, she concedes defeat. Eric attends Lisa, wishing he didn't have to use his only antidote on her, but at least salvages the syringe, even though he later finds out the poison wouldn't have killed her, he didn't want to risk it then. Lisa is still paralyzed so Eric has to take her over his shoulder armor and all. Lisa reminds him that they will be married, even though Eric wish she'd have forgotten about that.

It starts to rain, so he sets up camp in the forest. Lisa asks, what about her? and Eric says your on your own cause their is only room for one in the tent. Lisa Says O.K. and stays under a tree. Checks that he has 14 bullets left in the magazine, then goes to sleep. He awakes to find that he is under 'attack' by a Blue Slimegirl. He manages only to go as far as the camp limits before he gets stuck again. He reaches for his grenade, but it's no use. The Slimegirl is now in his pants. Eric asks, as he is being sexually molested by the slime, "what are you doing?!" Slime says, Need your seed. Eric Realizes, that he is about to be Raeped and asks Lisa for Help. Lisa Draws her sword as soon as she sees whats happening. Slime Starts Raeping Eric and Eric tries to resist the urge to, 'give in' for as long as he can. Eric Tells Lisa to put down her sword and to get his grenade. Eric Gives Lisa Instructions on how to use the Grenade. Lisa doesn't know how that would help but Eric tells her to just do it. Lisa does as was instructed. Grenade goes off. Eric gets blown 6 meters away from the blast, badly injured. He has enough strength to go back to his camp and inject himself with morphine. He was then able to regain himself, and run away before the Slime had a chance to regenerate itself. He runs to a graveyard where the morphine wares off. He's in pain as he sits beside a grave and tends to his wounds. He hears moaning noises then stands up to see where it's coming from. Zombies, He takes out his mp5 and shoots 14 Zombies in the head with the last 14 bullets in the magazine. There where too many of them so he falls back. Before he leaves, he spots a fallen soldiers last stand. Salutes it, then leaves the graveyard. He figures since someone killed the soldier, that there must be another soldier existing somewhere in Mamono Land(as he calls it).
The rain stops as he continues his way towards the city, without(?) Lisa. He feels kinda lonely. As dawn strikes, he finally arrives at the city.



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Threfs Mamono Girls, Strictly Business Dealings/Familiars
Posted on: 11/16/09 04:56AM



The Fallowing Mamono Girls I meet up with, along with some guy 'Volunteers' in My Troupe, Strictly for Business Purposes:

Inari
Meet up with them(One tailed starting off; one Inari per biweekly session) during daylight hours in the Zipangu region on purposes that involve the use of Their Focused Magic & Shape shifting abilities to assist me In learning to conjure/focus/control/manipulate My own. Teaches me in the Art of Shape Shifting along with spells and proper discipline/training.
Relationship: Strictly Direct Platonic Business Associate
Payment: Monetary, Prime Cuts of Meat, Sometimes Gigolo payments(For when I Advance in Immunity against a one tailed Inari), 'Sweet Dreams ;)'
Very Polite and Respectful Mamono Girls. On a few occasions though, are known to make subtle sexual gestures onto one; I usually just shrug it off as a joking mannerism.
Hehe, Silly Vixen ^_^. She also assist in accumulating My Resistance to Seduction. When I have learned enough to become Immune to a One Tailed Inari, I pass her off a Gigolo so that she will grow an Extra Tail and I can further build on my discipline; the transfer of the gained power onto me instead of the Gigolo involved is due to a technicality that involves a contract/Spell bound agreement between us and is filtered through the proper and controlled use of Magic Circles with a few Mediums supervision, Just in case there is ever an overflow though that has yet to become a real safety hazard due to all the safeguards and separations involved in the overall process. When I become Immune to a two Tailed Inari, the process continues until I can successfully become Immune to a Kyubi. By that time, I'll be Immune to pretty much All unwanted Seductions, and They will be left with their Loving Husbands. I choose to go with different Inari's cause they get quite crafty if you spend too much time with just one, that and they all possess different spells and disciplines which will help me to to master My abilities in various forms. The 'Sweet Dreams' payment is paid during the Evening since she can't grow an extra tail if she has wet dreams on her 'own', given to those that behave themselves nicely, which they often do ;).
They often ask me before I leave after the days lessons, if I would ever give into them physically. I simply hesitate for a moment, turn my head looking back to them and respond with, "In Your Dreams" and they giggle close the door and go to sleep early that nigh X).

Jurougumo
Meet up with them during daylight hours in the Zipangu region on the purposes of purchasing or requesting tailored clothing and other such fabrications.
I gotta have My Nice Threads, Can't be seen as a cheap peasant roaming about(Unless I am purposely in Disguise/Incognito, which I find often am when not out in the Field).
I need the kind of threads that make Kings envy my wears, so I have to arrange the proper payments*;)* for it.
Relationship: Strictly Platonic Business Trader/Barterer
Payment: Monetary, Prime Wild & Captured Live Stock*Includes Wererabbits, and other really annoying & applicable Mamonos :p*, Valuable Items of her Interest, Expendable(Usually Willing or otherwise) Gigolos
I seek out the best Juougumo in the Zipangu region and will not settle for anything less then the best she can offer me. This however leads to the amount owed to take on mountainous proportions. I Often find myself giving one of each payment type for the high end tailored stuff, Love My Special Cloak I am quite fond of. It's made from the Fabric of the Jurougumo and It is Very Light in Weight But was also forged with Many interesting abilities I had to pay EXTRA for and Find the means for her to be able to weave it into the fabric for me. Among some of the current abilities it possesses are, but not limited too: Teleportation, Reflection(Both Physical & Elemental/Energy Projectiles), Deflection(Both Physical & Elemental/Energy Projectiles With Stun Effect for Physical Strikes), Illusion, Float(Haven't sprung for the Fly feature, yet), Drift, Flame Proof, Water/Liquid Proof, Stain Proof, Freeze Resistant(Need more payments later for the Freeze Proof though), Syphon(Man that was expensive, but Oh So Worth it), Terra Proof(Also Works against Plant Types and their Tenties), Magic Resistant(Needs more payments and Time to acquire Magic Proof), Thief/Repossession Proof(Wasn't cheap, but I had to make that a priority), Electric Divert, Overflow Protection(had a few times where it saved me so it was well worth it), Invisibility(Though I can always see it when I want/need too), Enchanted Enemy Grab/Bind Effect(Hard to acquire, more expensive to implement), Phase Through Effect(Requires Practice to use, Quite Expensive), Reshape(Technically It's, It's the only thing I wear when I wear it but due to its physical versatility, no one can tell), Special Storage Compartment Pockets & Telepathic/Spell Driven communication(Ongoing tailoration, currently have 20 but am working on the next 5), Indestructible(it can split apart when Needed but Always reforms back when required as well, Most expensive and hardest to attain of all the possessed abilities). Overall, I'd say this has cost me about 12 Kings Ransoms(Don't Know What she does with the Money, though I bet She Just Gambles it away, drinks sake, and parties during the early evening hours), over a thousand Wererrabits(Good thing they repopulate themselves fast, eh?), Hundreds of Valuable Items I had to battle for & collect, 15 Gigolos(Don't ask me where they went, maybe she just got tired of them and let them go, or not; they forged a contract with me, they knew prior what they were getting themselves into) and has taken about 4 years to make; It is still not finished :(, though I have warn it many times regardless. Got to add Dark Resistant and Eventually Dark Proof among other shortfalls. BUT when Completed, it will be teh most awesome wear eva!
I also Buy Pretty dresses for Alice to Wear and other Clothes for my other Mamono Girl Troupe Members that have earned a reward, those Mamono Girls that have fallen short of my expectations get the skimpy clothes ;), Course Sometimes I think they shortfall me on purpose a few of the less important times ^o^.

Cyclops
Meet up with them in some of the More Deeper Mountains and occasionally on the outskirts of towns for them to forge weapons for My Mamono Girl troupe. Also, a Special Weapon Just for ME that requires periodical upgrades that only they are worthy of carrying out for me. Also when the chance permits, request that they teach me their forging techniques so I can maintain Upkeep on My Weapon Myself in it's current form until Fully Completed at which point it will become SELF maintained and effortlessly customizable. That Will Usually Require a Gigolo Payment, but is well worth it ^_^.
Relationship: Strictly Platonic (Platonic Friend?) Business Trader/Barterer of Weapon Services and Goods
Payment: Monetary, Nice Assortment of Exotic fruits Outside the Mountainous Region, Willing Gigolo(With a Fine Print technicality that involves a contract/Spell bound agreement between us, of which transfers and gives Me Solitary Possession of the Weapon forged by the Cyclops involved in the transaction between them).
Thanks to My three eye'd Mamono girl, Most Cyclops are inclined to do business with me since they feel that I won't judge them unfairly, and I don't. In Fact, I truly admire there Precision craftsmanship as esteemed blacksmiths and often, Pay Handsomely ;), with one of my Gigolos. Famed Warriors have custom weapons, so why not me? Why Should I settle for Market Brand Weapons when I can Have and deserve far better. Which Is why I deemed necessary to have Cyclops create a Brand for me that I can call my own. Some Weapon that says: This is Threfs Weapon, This Weapon Encompasses Threfs Many attributes and abilities, It is a weapon suited for and worthy of his Caliber, You could only wish you had it. And that Brand My peoples is Threfs Gilded Slime Brand. And What A Magnificent Weapon it is, If I do Say so Myself ;). It is made from very special Materials and forged by very special means, hence the Gilded and Slime portion of the name. By the initial appearance of it, one would think that it is an object of jest. One that couldn't possibly be in any conceivable way, harmful. Ah, but it's outside appearance carries much deceit. One would think that getting struck by it, would feel as if they were being splashed with the force that of a bucket of water, or at its worse, a Rubber Chicken. Oh, but No. They soon learn of the Real Dangers this Weapon Truly Possesses. It is Elemental of Slime, and therefore contains many Slime attributes and Abilities. It can change its shape and Size to suit the appropriate needs; Which means, it doesn't always take the shape of a Brand and in fact can even be split into multiple parts to form Any Weapon Type & Combination. My favorite Weapon Configurations for My Gilded Slime Brand Include(but aren't limited too): Two Helix Twist Double Edge Blades with Lance Pointed Tips, Naked Women Shaped Hilts/Grips*:p* that feel oh so nice to hold by many aspects, Knuckle Guards, and Dagger Shaped Extensions protruding Horizontally at the base of the blade just over the Hilts/Grips with a Slime Core Center Piece; Surprisingly Long Invisible Blade(s'?') with a Naked Woman Shaped Hilt/Grip*:p* and a Slime Core Center Piece just above hilt where the Invisible Blade emanates from Protected by an Unseen Force field Cube; 'Modified' Revolver Firearm with Mid Sized Blade 'Attachment' Forged around the Barrel, Scope Cross-hair, Naked Woman Shaped Hilt/Grip*:p, Yeah, By Know this should be considered a Constant theme with My Gilded Slime Brand* and a Slime Core Center Piece Located on the Barrel portion of the Firearm near the top Near/under the Scope held in the Hands of the Naked Woman Shaped Grip, The Trigger is the Womans Boobies*:p*(Left Hand) Long Sized Machete, with a Naked Woman Shaped Hilt/Grip and a Slime Core Center Piece in the middle of the Grip where The Naked Woman Shape has her Arms and Legs Wrapped around the Slime Core, Protected by a Thick/Dense Slime Layer Laminate and is Secured to my wrist with a Slime strap of Similar Durability(Right Hand). The Abilities of My Gilded Slime Brand aren't Just limited to changing of Shape and Density. In a Defensive Situation, My Gilded Slime Brand can Capture an opponents weapon, morph around it and is able to accomplish from there the fallowing Tasks: 1. Immobilize the Opponents Use of their Weapon by holding it through a Molecular/Polar Bond(Holds the Weapon on a Molecular Level Much like a Polymer by seeping into the 'cracks' and holding it in place) once it has been Captured by My Gilded Slime Brand, which comes more or less naturally when we are engaged in a power struggle crossing blades. 2. IF Their Weapon Isn't protected be certain Magics, Disintegrates The base of the Weapon Leaving Only The Hilt/Grip still Intact. 3. If their weapon has any special abilities tied to it(Magic that amplifies it's power and stuff like that), My Gilded Slime Brand Records that Information provided that it Stays mended to it long enough to Copy All the abilities and Shape configurations of their weapon(Two Seconds Min, Two Minutes Tops) and in the event of lost transmission due to removed physical contact with their weapons out of whatever means saves the recorded information retrieved & picks up the rest upon later contact; If the weapon requires certain magic/means to activate extended abilities, I can only access them if I know the means to activate said abilities myself(For instance, if the weapon requires a certain Magic Signature to activate the extended abilities, I would Have to match that signature in order to use them, Also Self Destruct type abilities are Negated/Omitted/Skipped/Aborted from My Gilded Slime Brand should their weapon contain safeguards of that nature). 4. Neutralizes/Removes Any Poison On Contact with the opponents weapon should it laced with any poisons. 5. Syphon Energy/Magic From My Opponent through Physical Contact made with their Weapon and My Gilded Slime Brand. So against me in a defensive situation, it is probably best(though mayhaps futile) to fight offensively instead so as to prevent me from acquiring your Weapons configuration, attributes, and abilities. Some consider My weapon to be a, Bastard type Sword for what it is able to do :). And I have only explained the Defense capabilities it has in a locked struggle scenario. For this instance however, I shall explain some of the Offensive Capabilities of my Gilded Slime Brand. You are perhaps aware of the already existing Acidic Ability, and where only hinted upon its Poisonous ability. Much like it grabs an opponents Weapon, it can also Grab the opponent themselves in a similar manner and inject a paralytic, Immobilizing and quite painful Poison that drops most Opponents to their Knees. I myself am Immune to that poison type due to the Slime Molecular changing Capabilities of My Gilded Slime Brand; It alters my chemical composition to a fine point where the Poison cannot harm me, this also has other capabilities aside from Poison Immunity which I will Not go into the details of here due to classification of Info. It's a(Dark Type) tactic I use as a form of, persuasion you might say. The Antidote will be administered to them as soon as they concede Defeat OR Until I am satisfied with the delivery of any information or goods they provide me OR if there's something they have that I want that they don't want me to have; Come now, be a friend and Share, why dontcha >:)? If they refuse(and some have), then they'll just have to let the poison run its course(Which could take hours or even a few days) or find the antidote themselves(Yeah, Good luck with that seeing as how your immobilized and even then, the Poison Changes formation due to the Slime Attribute nature it is comprised thereof). What Can I Say?, that song Beckons me to do the Hustle, and Hustle I will, to My benefit >XD. There are other means of extracting information I want that are less painful Using my Slime's Fluent and Telepathic/'Mind Reading' capabilities and perhaps a little more direct, but wheres the fun in that >X)? Kinda save that type of stuff, FTW if they are uncooperative *Maniacal Laughter*. I am However not that cruel of a Man, so Long as I get what I want and those involved aren't being complete Asses to me when I ask politely, which I often do. That takes care of the Poison Type ability, it also can use other Elementals & like Attributes as well, as you may have imagined; Ice types being the most difficult to deploy through direct use. Now on to the other ability/technique, Slime Seepage >:). As you know, armor protects one from Most physical and striking Attacks. What about Slime? Nope, :). Not unless you spring for the Slime Sealant Magic and can afford to maintain it monetarily in a frequent use environment, even than unless your completely armored it can only protect you from Slime seeping inside from outside the confines of the Armor AND Well, Armor is Heavy so that is also something to think about knowing that Slimes also posses a 'Wet Blanket Effect'. Slime based Armor(Slime Undershirt if you Still want to wear conventional Armor) is probably your best defense against Slime Seepage, but it feels somewhat Slimy to wear so it may Not*Or may to some, ;)* feel all that comfortable to wear but at least you'll be protected against Slime. Details concerning that and My Slime Armor to Come later. The Slime doesn't just seep into the armor, but also flesh and beyond, so yeah it can cut you in different ways and by different means So its just as good if not better then bladed based or even some projectile based weaponry. Those that are ticklish should feel more concerned about the offensive capabilities of My Gilded Slime Brand :p. To cover a few Offence and Defence tactics, time to mention the Tenti Ability of My Gilded Slime Brand. Did you see that coming? All of a sudden, before I am struck, My Gilded Slime Brand anticipates Immediate Danger and Lashes out a Mighty Slime Tentacle that Stops the strike before it has a chance to inflict damage. Advance Defense and Surprise counter that shocks most opponents into a wide opening for me to advance upon. As you might have guessed, I can control the shape, density, distance, force, and direction of multiple Slime tenties(Usually about 12 tops) provided That I have enough magic stored in my Gilded Slime Brand to deliver such attacks. It also makes Grappling and Immobilizing opponents such a breeze, not to mention whipping/Lashing them for Humiliation effect ;). Oh Such Tentiful fun My Gilded Slime Brand has ^_^. By now you'd probably be wonderin', Thref How would YOU feel if someone somehow(Through some freakish force of nature) Managed to take your Gilded Slime Brand and use it against you? How/What would I feel? Nothing :), I have safeguards in place so that in the Highly Unlikely event that my Gilded Slime Brand is somehow stolen and used against me, attempting to strike me won't inflict any damage or effects thereof upon me due to My Contract like Bind with the Gilded Slime Brand; if anything my pride might get injured and would probably force me to seek retribution using it against the offending party once I reattain my physical possession over it. BTW, My Gilded Slime Brand has that Boomerang effect so it will return to my possession once I communicate telepathically with it. And Finally, One More thing I care to Mention about My Gilded Slime Brand before I go on to talk about what Else I have Cyclops make for me, where/how My Gilded Slime Brand gets/maintains its power. Well With such an Awesome Weapon, there must be some restrictions it has, right? Correct. This is where I take care & make sure my Gilded Slime Brand stays in maintainable conditions. You'll remember me Mentioning Slime Cores, and from what you know about them they are able to store magics, energy, and perhaps other elemental entities. That is where the Energy is stored and monitored, but how does it draw in/generate energy? Do I need to infuse it with energy ammunition or something similar? There are about three ways I accomplish the infusion of the required energies: 1. Energy Syphoning, as in a way it is accomplished that I have mentioned previously. 2. Spell Casted Injection of Energies and Magics Directly to My Gilded Slime Brand. 3. Different Absorption Tactics through the Slime Properties of my Gilded Slime Brand, Primarily, through blocked/countered/parried Physical offensive strikes dealt directly to my Gilded Slime Brand itself; it absorbs the impact of dealt strikes and transforms it into energy my Gilded Slime Brand uses to charge itself. In regards to the mentioned #3, that only applies to physical strikes onto it that I don't deliver directly myself; I can't just charge my Gilded Slime Brand by bashing it against something myself, doesn't work that way(Although there is a workaround technicality, but it is unconventional/uncommon for most situations, Still it is available to me should I be able to meet those minimal requirements.) Safeguard includes Overflow protection tactics/procedures, which prevents my Gilded Slime Brand from overloading in case some opponents manage to attempt an overflow tactic against me, also my Gilded Slime Brand itself is naturally indestructible thanks to the attributes of Slime ;). Currently Incomplete as an all time weapon, due to the limitations of the nature of Cyclops; every time I add abilities too it, I have to find the means to Regain a Lost ability in the process. There is a lot of effort required to use it, but as soon as all the components are forged together, it will no longer require any more effort to maintain it. Now then, on to other wares I have Cyclops make for me.
Slime Armor, Strange Right? How can Slime protect you from physical strikes? As mentioned before, Slimes Can change their densities on a molecular level. They are light in weight but can offer as much defense against attacks as full clad armor. Feels like Wearing Jello and can tickle at times, but if you can get by that and tolerate, it can be the best type of armor you can wear. A shortfall however, may be the fact that its effectiveness is greatly hindered/nullified by ice type attacks and environments. Fortified with Spell & Elemental resistances, it could prove to be a very formidable ware to wear.
Moderate Weight Plated Armor. Wear that in Combination with Slime armor. Specifications are drawn out prior to insure a comfortable fit. Conditions up my body while providing me Moderate protection against strikes. I usually only ware that though on certain occasions, I Alternate to my Light Weight Plated Armor to see the results of speed boost I get by wearing Moderate version. When I can move adequately fast/comfortable in my Moderate Weight Plated Armor I default to wearing Light weight Plated Armor full time, I then move it up to Heavy Plated Armor and repeat the process until I can eventually move Effortlessly in Full Clad Armor, much like my Dullahan Does.
As Stated before, I am not much on defense so this isn't that much of a priority for me, That, and I like my athletic type build/figure/size.
Plated Gauntlets. Although they are unnecessary when I wield my Gilded Slime Brand, I find advantages to wearing them as they condition my Arms well. Same Weight training applies here as it did with Moderate Weight Plated Armor Mentioned above. The Insides are Lined with Comfortable Materials. Need to protect my Hands, You know?
Custom Fit, Variable Weight Boots. Traveling on foot to various places, the proper ware is important to keep in mind. I have a Cyclops play the role as a cobbler and tailor make me some all terrain Boots. Their shape is more like that of shoes but have been given certain shape shifting factors to form as high as knee High boots if ever needed. The Variable weight factor is for Weight training to work my legs and help increase strength and speed; they can also be used as floatation devices, though I will say that walking atop of water is a tad difficult even for me :s, skating however is a simpler method. Steel toed, liquid proof frame and Jelly Comfy Interior. Bottoms change shape to adapt to terrain for optimal traction. Stealth Capabilities are also present due to materials used and Muffled attributes. Coated with a special Laminar that always make them shine in daylight and prevents external wear as well as staining.
Perhaps someday after I attain my Complete Gilded Slime Brand, I will consider acquiring a Cyclops to join me in My Mamono Girl Troupe, as they are very stable and Non assaulting to Males. We'll have to work out how to get ourselves some Shrink and Grow trinkets for her to use accordingly when we reach villages though, seeing as they are giant types. In the meantime, they are very valued business personnel.

Imp
Meet up with a few separately and on Rare occasions. Have Safeguards set up prior to arrangement to prevent unwanted advances & to prevent possible betrayal. Usually when I do meet with them, it is usually for assistance purposes. Dangerous to be around with too long, so limits are established to prevent unwanted contacts that may become prolonged. Carefully monitor dosages of Gigolos as we are well aware of the dangers of dealing with Imps.
Relationship: Strictly Platonic Business Trader/Barterer of Services and 'Acquired' Goods
Payment: Monetary(sometimes), Technicality Contract Bound Willing Gigolo Volunteer(Necessary for transactions with Imps, they are the fussiest to have to deal with; they prefer this payment type over all and often times don't except any form of Monetary or other payment types, half the times our deals end up broken beforehand due to this).
At certain times, I require the assistance of Imps to carry out some of the more Questionable of my dealings. Most Sorcerers use their own energy for payment(Foolish), I however have made a cleaver compromise/workaround via the use of my willing(or otherwise, misbehaving/failing to meet expectations) Gigolo participants. It involves Contract Bound Spells and technicalities that involve the Imps, the applicable Gigolos, and Myself indirectly. Here's a rough explanation of how it works. The Imp here is considered the Direct Supplier, The Gigolo Involved is Considered a From of Payment. On the grounds that he is indebted to Me, his creditor, and since the Gigolo can't pay me directly himself, I will instead settle for what the Imp has to offer and In exchange for what the Imp Supplies him that he will transfer sole possession of to me due to his debt, I will Waive his debt; again provided that he pays the Imp and that what the Imp gives him for his 'services' onto her are transferred solely to Me at which point the following has taken place: I have the Gigolo and I'll Trade the Imp for his 'services' as long as she accepts him as a form of Payment and agrees to fallow her suit of nature, Gigolo Gives himself up to Imp, Payment onto the Imp is received and reciprocates/provides Services for Gigolo which ultimately translate to fulfilling MY request(s), once the Imps Services to the 'Gigolo' are Complete with no foul ups(as they seldom are) and I am satisfied with the results, I shall remove/waive the debt owed that I had previously placed upon the Gigolo concerning a separate matter. End Results, Imp has something I want, I get Gigolo to give himself up on my behalf and in exchange he no longer is indebted to me, Imp Nails Gigolo*or is it Gigolo Nails Imp? Eh, Who cares as long as it Ain't me ;)*, Imp coughs up the goods/services, I get what I want, Imp gets what she wants, Gigolo Doesn't owe me anymore and gets the bonus satisfaction of getting physical with an Imp, I keep my Virginity intact, Every bodies Happy for through their own aspects :). It's a lot of trouble to have to go through, but it is well worth it for the most part. They usually are consulted in that described manner as a last resort and we always monitor for dangerous exposure intervals just in case she feels like pushing her luck. As time progresses, I'll use my research concerning Imps and transfer only the benefits onto Mimics to acquire similar abilities that don't involve the use of Souls/Spiritual Energy as a form of payment.

Amazoness
Got quite a scheme worked up for this type of Mamono Girl. We have yet to encounter/engage them directly as we are still finishing up, Recon. Once completed, I'll run simulations and eventually call a few of them out to battle, where I hope to acquire them to serve me as their new leader; though I may have to Rule63 myself through my acquired Shape shifting abilities prior just to be safe for that time being. Upon Victory, I shall reveal my actual Identity as Thref(instead of, Threfia) and watch the shock and despair on their faces after they come to realize that they were defeated by a Man. Male spectators of the battle that don't know any better, sorry to disappoint you and leave promptly >:/. Female Spectators, stick around and continue to watch if you like what your seeing ;).
Relationship: Strictly Platonic Business Trader for Services Rendered
Payment: Mony 4 Nothin', and yo tricks for free ;)
I send to the Amazoness Villages Periodically, One Mimic in Disguise(though That hardly seems Necessary) and One Male Volunteer(There were many, but I had to choose the most appropriate and deserving to carry out these sensitive Missions). Upon Learning and Acquiring their Tactics, they return to me and report upon everything they observed there*And We do Mean everything ;), a consolation treat for the Male volunteers that didn't get to go* thanks to the assistance of a Crystal Ball Pendant I Equipped the Mimic With. She then is ordered to Spar with My Slimes in a Sealed off and undisclosed Location where the Slimes learn everything she was taught as a Warrior in the Amazonesses Camp. We then Spar with the Slimes and learn the techniques of the Amazonesses and also pickup counter formations to take them on in battle; it of course also adds to our already impressive array of move sets. Two more phases need to be complete before we consider engaging them head on. The First one Involves another Male and Mimic participant, where we measure How much Naughty Stamina is required to impress OR Amaze the Amazoness tribe during their mating rituals; this will be an indicator of how much power may be necessary to take them on in battle safely. The last One involves Just sending a Mimic to acquire the Succubus transformation process then teleporting back into a highly secured environment for Safe Examination to gather research data, corruption proof due to special safeguards acquired prior to sending her and careful monitoring of process throughout the procedures involved.
We are just about ready with what we have and know now, but I'd rather not leave anything to chance. The Amazoness will be a Key asset to posses in preparation to take on the Demon Lord. . . Well, that's all you need to hear regarding that >:/.
One more thing I'd like to mention, is that we are also looking for an Amazoness who Wasn't corrupted by succubi. When we can secure her, she will prove to be an important asset to our cause as well. Sources indicate that we may encounter such a Mamono Girl in the near future, so that is something we can look forward too with great anticipation, and for you guys, another Mamono Girl Troupe Member of Mine that I will add an explanatory for your reading pleasure.


Well that's that. I don't think I'll have anymore updates for a while concerning My Mamono Girls. Depends on when and if I see any Mamono Girl Profiles that suit my fancy.
There you Have it, Those are My Mamono Girls. I think I'll make an Anubis Mamono Girl Entry soon, I just have to see if Anubis responds to the PM I sent her. . .
Till then I'll come in and out of this thread as necessary and, If I feel needed, respond to any posts you guys make thar. Questions I'm Open to answer regarding Mamono Girls as well as any questions you have about my scripts Regarding Mamono Girls.

Hope you enjoyed reading :).



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Posted on: 11/16/09 10:17PM

I won't be posting it here because it's 1,273 words.

I'm not a loss if you don't see the story.



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Posted on: 11/17/09 01:41AM

Amun-ra, post you story here!!! This is an order!^o^

Btw my first language is Chinese, second is Melayu, third is English, although my english is better then my melayu, as i hate melayu.

Last message to Thref, next time, space out your text of wall. Ever and i am bad at grammar i am just uncomfortably for reading them.

Next Life Of Private. Eric Fong, Chapter 4: Danger Everywhere? Part 1

Hmm, now i reach the city, what am i gonna do now? Oh yeah, i can just start doing quest like some dumbass RPG "FF" game my childhood friend talking about.

"Woo..." What the fuck? there is still a zombie following me! Shit, i let my guard down and get grabbed from behind.

Suddenly, i hear a sword swipe and slice though zombie's neck, i turn around and seeing Lisa.

"Lisa? I Though you run aw-" Before i finish the sentance, Lisa hugged me, tear is filling her eye."Eric... please don't leave me again... i am all alone since i am child, my mum is murdered and my is missing..."

"...Lisa, don't worry, i won't leave you anymore.""Then will you ma-""Nope! DON'T.EVEN.THINK.ABOUT.IT."

I let go of Lisa, "Come on." and walking into the city...

In the city, i looking about for clinic or hospital, i wasn't forgot about the wound. I need better medical attention."What are you looking for?"Lisa asked "Eh, a clinic or a doctor... maybe place for live?""Ah, i see, i came this city before, i know where have a cheap inn."

"Oh well, guide me.""Here."I enter the inn "Eh, how much for... a day."I asked the inn owner"Look at the list!"Inn owner reply.

I take a look at the list

"1 DAY:100 coins.
7 DAY:700 coins."

"Eh... seem like we have not enough cas-well, i mean coin."I surprise a little"Right, Let's find some job to do."Lisa make a "No another way" smile.

I keep walking at the street with Lisa, and saw a paper sticky at the wall "Please save my kidnapped daughter! Savior will reward will 500 coin. Kidnapper has been seen near the market."

"Well Lisa, i get it now, can you wait at that Inn? I prefert solo on mission."I tell Lisa"Are you gonna leave me?""Nope, but will bring back some mone- coin."

I go to the market, using my free running skill climb on the roof. I take out my M40 sniper with broken scope, even scope is broken, but it still can use as binoculars. I look thought the broken scope, look for any suspect.

After 30 min of spying, i see 3 man carrying a beg with size of children, i quickly jump to another roof, following them on roof(AC2 much?) But then they goes inside the big warehouse, i climb off the roof and follow them into warehouse. Inside the warehouse, i finding inside of it is really dark, I wear my night vision goggles, taking out my m9 pistol and equip it with silencer.

"Hey, do you think how much coin we will get for selling this girl?"a man asked"Don't know, probably high price."

I point my gun at one of their leg. Suddenly, a voice inside my head "Kill them!" then i lost consciousness.

I wake up in middle of pool of blood, my armor, knife on my right hand and pistol on my left hand is bloody, beside me just two bodies don't don't breath. I stand up, Take off my night vision goggle and check the body and realism i feed rest of my 12 bullet into them, what have i done? What happen?

I open the bag, discover the out cold kidnapped girl, i checked the girl, she is not wounded. I carrying her to where she belong.

It is night since i wake up on that warehouse, i return to the inn with 500 coin.

"Lisa...""Eric, what happen to you? are you hurt?"Lisa is surprised for seeing my bloody body"Nope i am fine, hey, give him 200 coin. We are stay here for 2 day."

Part 1 end.



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Posted on: 11/17/09 04:32AM




Amun-Ra Say:

I won't be posting it here because it's 1,273 words.

I'm not a loss if you don't see the story


That's a petty excuse, There is isn't a limit to How Many Words can be entered in a single posting, And even if there were, the cut off would be set at 2000.

But your right, Your story probably isn't that great anyway; You said it yourself.
There's a reason your not posting it here. I have a couple of notions in the back of my head as to why that is.

Fine then, Don't post your story if you don't want too. BUT, don't come back here either, unless you have something to actually contribute to the thread directly.
What your doing could be classified as SPAM or Bot, and Board Leader hates both. I should know, I got accidentally banned once for that; really a funny story but it served a purpose that was, don't test Board Leader, Especially if he's in a bad mood.


Eric Say:

Last message to Thref, next time, space out your text of wall. Ever and i am bad at grammar i am just uncomfortably for reading them


If Only I could Eric, but that's a Board Issue; I have no control over that. Either I don't know the correct markup tags to use to achieve that(Board Leader Is never direct about all the markup tags that can be used, they are Easter Eggs scattered throughout this site), OR, That isn't possible cause that's the way the Forum Handles text in postings.

That last thing you said, I can't actually figure that one out :s.




To Eric on Chapter 4 part1:


Eric Reaches the City and wonders what his next move should be; He decides to take the RPG Approach for Some reason. Suddenly, he finds that a zombie had fallowed him all this way and just as it grabbed him from the rear, He hears the slice of the Zombies Neck come off and turns around to see that Lisa was back. They share a moment of reunitement where where Lisa says that she lost her mother(and father?) and has nobody left. Eric Says she won't leave her anymore then Lisa attempts to ask about their marriage plans where She is quickly interrupted by Eric with a distinction of NO. So they continue onward into the city looking for a hospital for Erics Injuries. First though, Lisa takes Eric to an Inn since she knows where one is in the city. Ask for Pricing, Finds that they are short on funds since they need 100 coins for the night. They walk out to the street and find a Reward for Rescue in the amount of 500 coins, with a lead of location near the marketplace. He asks Lisa to go stay near the Inn Since He'd rather take the mission Solo, Ensures her that he isn't leaving her. He goes near the Marketplace on a roof and takes out his M40 Sniper with broken scope; uses binoculars as a replacement. After half an hour looking around, he spots three men with a suspiciously large bag, he fallows them jumping from roof to roof until they reach a warehouse. He then fallows them inside the warehouse, puts on his night vision goggles, and silences his m9 pistol. As the Men inside talk amongst themselves, Eric Takes aim at one of their legs when Suddenly He hears a voice in his head that demands him to kill them. He blacks out and the next thing he knows, he comes too in the middle of a pool of blood with two bodies beside him and realizes that he had used up his last 12 bullets. Wonders how it all went down. He checks the Suspicious bag with the girl inside, finds she isn't injured but just unconscious then takes her back to get his reward. He goes back to the in Where Lisa Asks about his condition. Eric says he's Fine and to pay the Inn Keeper the 200 of 500 coins he's earned so they can stay there for two nights.


Eric, I hope you understand that I can't keep summarizing you stories for you cause it eats up a lot of my time.
Sorry, But I'll have to stop Translating for you :(.
If anyone has any trouble reading it, I'll Just Summarize when necessary from now on.



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Fine, jeez. You asked for it. How hard is it to click on a link to another site? >_>
Eric could do it, I dunno why you can't.
Also, my first language is English, my second is Spanish, and I'm trying to learn French now.
***
My name's Justin. I'm currently 17 years old. I'm one of the thin, not very muscular types, and people often mistake me as a few years younger than I really am.


I was riding along in a trading caravan through along with my family when all hell broke loose. Orcs charged through the woods and attaked us, waving their giant clubs around wildly. Everybody got their swords and bows out and started to fight back, but I got scared. I ran. I ran as fast as I could, deep into the woods. A female orc was chasing after me, but I managed to get away when she tripped over a root.
Five hours later, I was hopelessly lost. It was getting dark, and I knew I had to find some shelter. I traveled to a hill not to far, and, thanks to much luck I suppose, found a cave in the side of the hill. I crawled inside and peered deeper into the cave. It looked like it goes a lot deeper, but it was too dark to go much further. I sat down and laid my head against the wall of the cave. I was exhausted, so I fell asleep almost instantly.


I was woken by the sound of hooves on the hard cave floor. I opened my eyes and saw a huge woman, more than 6 feet tall... but it wasn't just a woman. On her legs, instead of feet, were large hooves. The legs were covered in a thick coat of fur, which went all the way up to her waist. She had six-pack abs that most men would die to have and breasts that women would die for as well. Her breasts were covered with what looked like a bra made out of a belt. Her arms were muscular as well. In her right hand she was carrying a large axe, which she wielded like it was a twig. She had the ears and horns of a bovine on her head, and behind her was a tail of a bovine as well.


She walked out from the darkness of the cave and stared at me with an intimidating grin. I tried to get up and run out of the cave, but she sprinted forward and grabbed my arm. I tried to pull my arm free, but she was too strong and she didn't even budge. She threw down her axe and then pinned me against the wall of the cave (luckily the wall is smooth and there are no sharp rocks). She stared deep into my eyes with that grin still on her face. I turned my head away from her, but she grabbed me by my chin and force me to face her. She then bent down to my hight and pressed her lips hard against mine. 'My first kiss!' I thought to myself. 'I've wondered what this would be li-'My thoughts were interrupted by her shoving her tongue into my mouth, swirling it around inside me. She pressed my head to her lips harder so I couldn't get away. Then, she shoved her tongue deeper down my mouth. It was long, much longer than a human's, and I gagged a bit as it touched the back of my mouth, almost entering my throat. She started to shove her tongue in and out fast, as if she was fucking my mouth with it.


She pulled her tongue out and removed her lips from mine. She grabbed my head with both her hands and force me down. Then she pushed my face against her partially exposed pussy in the mass of fur below her waist and pulled my hair hard as if commanding me to do something. She grunted loud as she ground her hips and rubbed her pussy against my face, smearing a bit of her juices on my lips. She pulled harder, and I stuck my tongue out so it moved past her fur and entered her pussy a few inches. She tasted slightly bitter, but I kept my tongue out anyway. She pushed harder, as if telling me to go deeper. I stuck my tongue in as deep as I could go in response. She then grabbed my head in a tighter hold and started to move my head back and forth, making me fuck her with my tongue. She thrust her hips and humped my face wildly, grunting with each thrust. She went faster and faster, and then finally she had her orgasm. She pressed me hard against her so I had to take it all into her mouth. She came much more than I thought she would, about a shotglass worth of her cum squirted into my mouth. She held me there and gripped my hair tightly, not letting go until I swallowed. I swallowed all of her cum, feeling mortified and embarrassed that she was making me do these things.


She let go of my head, but then kicked me in the chest, knocking me down onto the ground on my back. She leaped on top of me and held me down. With one hand she grabbed my shirt and yanked hard, ripping the fabric and pulling it right off my body. She threw it away and then grabbed my pants. Gripping each side of them, she pulled hard and popped off all the buttons on them and ripped them wide, and then pulled them down and took them off of me. She grabbed my underwear and yanked hard, ripping them off of me as well. This left me completely naked for her to see. I looked at myself and noticed that some time during her assault on me I'd gotten an erection. She held me down with her left hand and grabbed my erection with her right. Her strong, rough hands moved up and down, slowly at first. I looked away from her in embarrassment. She then stopped for a second, then started to jerk me off at a superhuman speed. My eyes opened wide as I felt a wave of pleasure take my body, and I felt myself reaching orgasm orgasm quickly. However, before I was able to cum, she suddenly stopped. As pulled up her makeshift bra with one hand, reveling her breasts to me. She kept holding me down, and then then moved herself over my cock. Grabbing my cock roughly with one hand, she moved it up so the head was pointing to her pussy. She looked me straight into my eyes with a malicious grin then thrust her hips downward, taking my cock deep into her pussy, stealing my virginity. With one hand she grabbed my throat, making it harder to breath and the other pushing down on my chest, making it impossible to get away. Moving her hips upward, she moved made a bull-like snort and slammed them downwards, taking the full length of my cock inside of her. It felt so wet and hot inside of her, it took all my willpower not to cum right then and there. Then she jerked her hips up, and thrust them down again, then did this again and again, going faster each time. Soon she was fucking me like a wild animal, making more of those bull-like snorts each time. I couldn't hold it anymore, and my body started to squirm on it's own. Knowing that I was close to orgasm, she leaned her body forwards so her head was over mine and moved her hand to my right nipple. She pinched it hard, causing me a great deal of pain. While still fucking me wildly, she pulled hard on my nipples, making me cry out in pain and pleasure. She silenced me by gripping harder with the hand on my throat. I couldn't hold it back anymore, and I released myself inside of her, cumming mind-numbingly hard, my eyes widened to their fullest and my head tilted back as I attempted to cry out, but only making a hissing sound from air escaping my airway. Even as I came, she kept raping me, even faster than before, apparently turned on by me shooting my cum inside her. Even though I had just cum, I still remained hard, which she took full advantage of. She continued to ride me and fuck me like a monster, but then stopped as she came on my cock. As she came, her juices flowed out of her plugged hole, dripping down my cock and onto my groin. Then she continued again, going just as fast as before.


She continued to rape me like this for several hours, showing no sign of wearing out soon. After what felt like my hundredth orgasm, I felt myself losing consciousness. My eyes slowly shut as she continue to molest me. I passed out then.
When I woke up, I was tied up with some sort of rope made from roots, and I saw my captor sleeping against the side of the cave. I tried to move, but I saw that my ankle was tied to a loop carved in the floor. As I tried to figure out how to untie the complicated knot on my ankle, my captor yawned as she started to awaken. I looked over, and just as she started to get up, I tugged on the right rope, freeing my leg. I got up and ran toward the mouth of the cave, as fast as I could. I heard her get up and chase after me. I knew I could never outrun her, but I tried anyway. I made it out of the cave, hearing her get closer to me as I sprinted as fast as I could. As I heard her hooves close enough behind me that she could grab me, I then heard a large thud, and the sound of her chasing me stopped. I stopped running as well and looked behind me. I saw a arrow sticking out of her chest, glowing a bright white light.


"Your welcome." a voice right behind me said quite loudly.

***
Well, hellooo, giant text wall.
Wait, that wasn't as long as I thought it was. Huh.

Oh well. *goes to work on next story about the Elf*



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Bump, can't let this die, i don't enough time to type story, maybe next time.



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Okay, i am here.

Side Story, The two unknown soldier.

What? Why i didn't continues my story? Because i just CAN'T.
If my bro see my typing hentai stuff i will be dead, i gave this a little humor.

Beside the squad where Eric Fong is joined in mamono land, there is another squad accident arrive mamono land. They are HECU, the Hazardous Environment Combat Unit. These soldier are more elite than the squad of Eric Fong, but most of them wiped out in surprise too...

"Where is this place, where are Black Mesa Research Facility we are suppose to go?"Soldier Bravo say.

"Leader, where are we?"Soldier beta ask.

"I don't know!"Leader reply.

"Shh, something is there."Soldier Alpha say.

About 15 Orc ran out from jungle and smack Soldier Beta in surprise.

"Argh! ..."

"Shit, Beta down, what are these guys doing?" Soldier Bravo say.

"Fuck! Just shoot them down."Leader fire at Orcs.

Leader fire on the Orcs, but didn't notice there is one sneak behind him, then grabbed from behind and knocked out.

"Leader!"Soldier Bravo yelled.

"Forgot him. Retreat, We can't take care all of these our self."Soldier Alpha suggest.

They run as fast as they could and stop inside jungle.

"BREAKA THAT MOTHERFUCKER JUST LEAVE ME HERE!!! FUCK!!!"

"... you hear that? Look like someone is swearing."Alpha say.

"I don't know, i have a bad feeling about this."Bravo reply.

They go over the tree and saw a man attacked by Hornets.

"..."Alpha is like -_- and Bravo is like O_O.

"That why i got bad feeling about this..."Soldier Bravo said.

"Look like we got another preys, get them!"Hornet said and getting their spear ready.

"I don't know, we get surrounded, we fight."Alpha say.

The two soldier shoot the hornets without mercy like Eric Fong does, they shoot directly to they body, killing them. They fire on the last Hornet.

"Enemy down."Bravo said.

This suppose to be done in one part, but...



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