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Rikko-43 Group: Member - Total Posts: 1179
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Posted on: 06/14/10 01:28PM
...hehe pokemon it seems, Dusknoir is my 2nd fav ghost, first being mismagius. Fav of all pkmn though is mawile :P

Holy...wow I didnt know you knew about the game I based that quote off of Eric. (Killing Floor) Cause Patriarch's quotes are awesome :P also yes I did get some idea of Muxleys new look from his body though it has metal on it but muxley cant summon creepy little "Children"

At least im starting to feel better
*The Train*

Reiwa was trying to hide best she could from all the people on board the train. She Just kept looking outside and eventually fell asleep to avoid anyone talking to her.

Rikko was talking with Exca and April, both seemed to be trying to interrupt each other to keep his attention. April eventually left and went to talk and bug faceless.

Vekii was sitting with her head rested on Rockefeller's shoulder and he had his arm around her. The slimes were lying down on top of each other with their arms wrapped around one another trying to fall sleep.

Alia was talking with Mir'la, and getting the information she needed at the same time. What she heard, saw, and learned was also heard by the Demon Lord himself (not even Alia knew that though).

Vespisect was curious about girtablilu poison and was asking them about it and if she could have some laced on her spear. Longshot was cleaning his guns and polishing them so they would be ready for battle.

Despite being among a large group of people Tava was milking herself and filling the bottles, she tried to not let Eric's daughter see though. A.M.E. was talking with Chrome about his metal body and her stitched up body.

The MH5 were just sitting there, planning they're next big attack once they left the groups.

All in all, it looked like smooth traveling as they saw the end of the desert ahead. It was almost evening. Exca was napping but as she did the Demon Lords influence on her mind grew as he chipped away at her by talking to her in her dreams (though she couldnt see him in them) she soon woke up, then fell back asleep peacefully. Soon they would have to traverse the thick and deep swamps outside of it. I just hope this train can get through the thick, heavy, and sturdy trees.

Hey look, we passed the challenge to all:Beautiful response number

EricFong Group: Member - Total Posts: 451
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Posted on: 06/14/10 09:57PM
If you know about killing floor, then i bet you got steam, eh? Expect, i don't care much about Astraea, cause she follow me on her own. Yin and Yang also can be called Tao.
Chapter D: A ready for everything.

Ellisa: Dad, what is she doing over there? *point at Tava*
Eric: Eh, better not to know... *cleaning cylinder of revolver*
Astraea: I... i never see anything like this before.
Eric: Hmm?
Astraea: Human, angel and mamono all together like nothing.
Eric: If you saw me and my friend 8 year ago, you would said the same thing... argh, these thing are hard to clean off...

He load the bullet into the revolver and spin it, then he go on with his golden whinchester.

After feel minute, he done with his whinchester and spin it single hand (Like this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vQ_UKyMTJBo ), then he stand up and look for something, even himself don't know what is he looking for, he look around at everyone than he looking at his daughter.

Eric: Ellisa, you hungry?
Ellisa: Mmm-Hmm.
Eric: I have some raw bald eagle meat here, just hope this train got a kitchen...

Surprisingly, Eric know how to cook, and even better.

Astraea fell asleep when Eric is cleaning his rifle, and Lina is having fun with Arashi and Vespisect.

Eric set his eye on Longshot, noticing his revolver, but... he let out a sigh and sit down.

Eric: (Phew, look like i not the only one who got the gun here)

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Chapter 22: A Surprise Visit From Home
Posted on: 06/15/10 11:25AM
(RX)
Far away from here, I live in a mansion with many other beings like nobody has ever seen. To the children who live there, they look up to me like I'm their father.
A family stretches beyond your relatives.

(Chrome)
Yeah, he's gonna say something before our chapters. He's like trying to set up a theme or something.

Anyway, on with the story!

We were nearing the end of the desert, and were heading towards the swamps. It might get a little bumpy from here on out. The intercom sounded with Ancient Gear Engineer on it.

A.G. Engineer: Attention passengers, because of the thick swamp ahead, the train will now be shifting to the sky. Please remain calm and do not atempt to leave the train.

RX: Krystal, did you fix the sky mode?

Krystal: Sure did! It's ready to fly! ^_^

RX: Hahaha! That's my girl!

Rikko: This thing can fly!?

RX: It sure can. Everyone, stay in your seats and hold on tight.

Recycler: INTRUDER ALERT! INTRUDER ALERT! TWO UNKNOWN MECHANISMS ON THE TRAIN ROOF!

RX: What!? *groan* Alright. *get's radio* Engineer, don't shift just yet, we have intruders.

A.G. Engineer: Yes sir.

RX: Alright Peacekeeper, time to show me what you got.

Eric: *loads gun* Right. Astraea, keep Ellisa safe.

Astraea: Okay.

RX: Chrome, Rikko, you two come with me as well.

Rikko: Okey dokey.

Chrome: I'm on it.

Oh yeah, the three heroes and the Cyber Warlord taking on the intruders!

The four of us climb to the roof to find Muxley's spider robots standing there. Doing...nothing.

Rikko: Why are they just standing there?

Eric: Something's not right.

A high voice sounded from the robots. As it spoke, sparks flew from the robots and parts started to fall off.

???: What this do!? What's that do!?

A girl's voice sounded from the robots as well.

???: Ooooh, look at this. Ooh! What does this thing do?

Chrome: What's wrong with those things?

RX: Wait! I know those voices.

???: RX! Is that you!

???: IT'S RX! HUG TIME!

Two flashes of electricity flew from the robots and landed on RX.

Chrome: AH! What the?

Rikko: RX?

Rotom: YAY RX! I MISSED YOU SO MUCH!

Ray: I'M SO HAPPY TO SEE YOU AGAIN!

RX: Ahahaha! Rotom! Ray! What are you two doing here?

Ray: We couldn't stay home anymore! We wanted to see you again!

The destroyed robots then burted into blue flames. Then turned into ashes then disappeared. A deep voice then sounded from nowhere.

???: Hello RX, It's been so long since I last saw you.

RX: He brought you two, didn't he.

Rotom: Uh huh.

Dusknoir appeared in front of RX.

Dusknoir: So, these are some of your new friends? The heroes I've heard about?

RX: Yeah, that's Chrome, he's Rikko, and that's Eric.

Rotom and Ray got off of RX and dashed to the three of us.

Rotom: Hi, I'm Rotom! Pleased to meet ya!

Ray: And I'm Ray!

Rotom: Don't be surprised if you see me like this!

Rotom transformed into a small boy who looked exactly like Ray, except he had short hair, and slightly longer shorts.

Rotom: When you see me like this, you call me Roy.

Chrome: Whoh, that's something. Well, it's nice to meet you too.

Dusknoir floated to in front of us next.

Dusknoir: Hello brave adventurers, I am Dusknoir. It's a pleasure to meet you.

???:C-Can we come out now.

A soft voice came from behind Dusknoir, then a small girl came from behind him.

The one in this picture:
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=295191

???: Heehee, yeah I wanna see these new guys.

A teenage voice sounded from behind Dusknoir and this girl came out:
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=433519
There are a few differences between the picture and the real girl.
There's no eye on her hat, and instead of that tattered mess on the lower part, from the waist down is a gray skirt, black & gray horizontally striped thighhighs, and boots with cute skull shaped buckles.

*Note*
These two girls were hidden behind Dusknoir in the scene where we first saw Dusknoir.

Dusknoir: Oh of cousre, this little sweetheart is Dianne, and the taller one is Denise.

Dianne: H-Hi.

Denise: Hi there. Heeheehee

???: Oh, are we late.

Something black and something white dashed from the ground and onto the train roof.

Dusknoir: Yes, you two are quite late.

RX: Dusk! Halo! Good to see you two!

Dusk: Good to you too RX.

Rikko: I guess you know them too?

RX: Yeah, I know all of them, except for that girl over there.

Denise: Hmph. :I

So much for the three heroes battling. Anyway, we take the seven newcomers into the train to meet everyone. Krystal recognized them right away.

Krystal: Roy! Ray!

Ray: Krystal!

Roy: YAY! Krystal's here!

Both of the kids ran to Krystal and hugged her. Jinzo noticed Dusk and Halo.

Jinzo: So, decided to join us, have we?

Dusk: Oh great, Jinzo.

Halo: Hmm, you look different since the last time we met.

Jinzo: I had a bit of an upgrade.

RX: Everyone, these seven are visiting from my home. That's Dusk and Halo.

Dusk & Halo: *bows* Pleased to meet you all.

RX: Roy and Ray.

Roy: HI!

Ray: HELLO!

RX: Dusknoir, Dianne, and Denise.

Dusknoir: Hello.

Dianne: Um...hi.

Denise: Hi everybody! *giggle*

Everyone said hi, although some were a bit intimidated by Dusknoir.

RX: The train is preparing to enter the air. Unfortunately, this cabin is completely full. So you'll have to move to the next car.

Dusk: Yes I can see you have your hands full here.

The seven of them moved to the next passenger car.

Kurai: Well if they have to move, I'm going too.

Shiruku: Kurai! Wait for me!

Krystal: I going to sit with them too. It's been so long since I've seen the kids.

Faceless: I'd like to speak with the new tall one.

April: Faceless! Wait for me!

Exca: C'mon Rikko, let's say hi.

Rikko: Okay.

Several group members moved to the next cabin to see the newcomers. After a minute or two, the intercom sounded again.

A.G. Engineer: Attention passengers, we are now preparing to enter the sky, please stay seated.

Various parts of the train began to move. The entire locomotive began to transform, even the inside began to shift. In a matter of minutes, it went from steam locomotive to a high-tech, sleek-looin', blue and white maglev monorail train!
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Maglev_train

The train then began to speed into the air and over the swamps. It felt a lot like a roller coaster ride. When the train leveled out, we were riding in the skies above the earth! Freakin epic!

End of Chapter 22

Rikko-43 Group: Member - Total Posts: 1179
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Posted on: 06/15/10 12:44PM
Well the flying skipped the whole swamp, and soon we'll be at rockefeller's Village, where we part ways, but dont go flying directly towards the Gateway to the Demon realm. That would ruin my plans for future chapters...and they could see you coming srom sar away and likely overwhelm you and you would all die a horrible death of stabbing, smashing, and rape. Safest way in is through the caves but theres so many different ways through them. You should go gather up good armies while we go through the caves :P. Eric can...actually I'll let Eric do what he wants :P

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Posted on: 06/15/10 09:30PM
Dont worry bout the split, Its still a crossover since your all still in my world, go sightseeing, find good fighters, etc. Do what you wanna do then once we beat Muxley is when I was planning the reuniting since all that will remain after him is the harem and the demon lord himself.

*Exca's Dreamstate*
Excas dreams are so overlapped in layers of her magic, both normal, and succubi that its her own little world that not even Jinzo or Lich Lord could see or enter. It was her own little protected world in her mind. She was sitting on a pile of books, tomes, and papers. Nearby was a field of daffodils, weeds, and small insects. In her dream she was reading when a voice echoed in her dream. It was the Demon Lord who was able to enter due to her succubus powers in her. She picked up an inner image of Rikko and some of her friends and held it tightly as the flowers and weeds began to whither and die.

"Ah my young, beautiful Exca." The lords voice said softly. "do you desire this half-undead friend of yours?" Exca nodded.

"Y-yes but I still wont join you..." She replied

"Ah but you wish to stay with him all eternity, yes?" the Demon Lord said. Exca nodded reluctantly. "Join me, I can make all your dreams come true, you can live for all eternity with him here in my realm." Exca sat down, the offer slightly intrigued her but she didnt want to join. "If you come stay with me, you will be surrounded by others who understand you and your feelings, with Rikko for all eternity, come, I shall show you..." Her Dream went black and the pile of books and field vanished. Rikko appeared by her side. She looked at him, behind him was the Demon Lords harem.

"Oh" Rikko began "Exca...its wonderful here, stay here with me forever. My love." Exca walked up to the vision of Rikko. He wrapped his arms around her in a gentle hug. She blushed and hugged back.

"All of this and more if you join me Exca." The lord said again. He was influencing her dream only because Exca was letting him. She then found herself unclothed along with Rikko on a large bed. He was on top of her, her face turned bright red as he was about to insert his penis into her. Then everything vanished and she found herself clothed again. "That was just a sample of whats to come if you join me Exca. So now, what do you say?"

Exca was still red in the face. She looked down and then spoke. "I-I'll think on it...lord..."

"very well, take all the time you need, lovely Exca." The lords voice said as it faded out of her dream. Her field and books were back. She began to wonder if she should join the Demon Lord.

*The Train*

Everyone was busy chatting away as the train flied over the vast swamp below. Rikko was sitting next to the sleeping Exca, petting her horns and hair. He saw her face flush red for a second and heard her moan softly for a second before returning to normal. He saw a wet spot form on her robes where her vagina was. She had came in her sleep. He just chuckled and spoke to himself quietly. "hehe hm, guess shes having a very nice dream."

It was finally evening. The day had been a long day of fighting.

"So...they trust me..." Alia said to herself when no one was around. "if they split, I'll follow the zombie boy and assassinate his group then this robots group then the gunman and his daughter..."

"What are you talking about, girl?" asked Choro as he was walking back to his cabin. Dureo was with him though he looked a little weaker and was holding onto the seats to walk.

"oh...uh...nothing, just reciting a poem to myself, its still in the works." She replied calmly.

"Nice sword you have there, odd how someone so young would have a such a fine looking blade like that. tell me young'un how did you get it?" Choro asked looking at the sword on her back.
(Sword)
http://www.hdwallpapers.in/walls/great_sword-wide.jpg

"..I-its been passed down through my family for centuries. My family has all been great swordsman since as far as theyve been recorded in history. I would rather not talk about them though. Most have been evil swordsman and mercenaries, I wish to be a warrior for the side of good. (Alia is making this up, shes used to doing this, its her job and shes VERY good at this kind of trickery). Ive trained in almost all forms and mastered them all. Offensive, Defensive, Fencing, barbarian, amazoness, everything, Im much older than I look (Thats not a lie)."

"You should show me sometime." Said Choro "If you wish, we could go on the Deck with permission from the others for a quick duel." Choro slightly pulled out his sword to show her. Alia could tell he was a master samurai. She became eager to duel him. she had always wanted to learn that style of sword fighting (she has only a little experience with that style. She knows how to defend against it but doesnt know how to use it offensively).

"I accept." Said alia as she pulled her sword off her back. Its gleaming shine caught Choro's eye. He knew it was a magnificent blade and she had taken care of it very well. He nodded and continued on. She sharpened her blade with a whetstone from her pocket and mentally, spiritually, and physically prepared herself for a possible, friendly duel with a fellow, highly skilled swordsmen.
...........................

Its up to mastermind to decide if this duel goes through or not. Just be careful Choro, shes the best in this world and pain doesnt stop her. But she obeys the rules of a normal friendly swordsman duel. She cant kill her opponent.

The constant sharpening of a weapon is based off of the monster hunter series. A major annoyance in the game (to me) is your weapons (even a hammer) blade constantly, even in the middle of a boss battle, forcing you to use a whetstone in the heat of battle. The game is awesome though, just got Monster Hunter 3 (tri) last week.

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Posted on: 06/15/10 09:40PM
No, he will wait for Jeff, Jeff have all of these equipment, weapon, he need and he won't die unless Eric does.
Why? Eric can endure pain, but does not mean he won't die, once Eric is down, Jeff will die when he take critical attack.

Eric: keeping the world in peace is my duty too, i will see what can i do about Demon lord and help.(I am immure to the succubus charm, i also can do extreme long range with sniper, 2500km)

Jeff's episode: First time in death.

Jeff: Hold up, Dreka.
Dreka: Huh?
Jeff: Nothing.
Chris: "tsh" Chris to Jeff, do you copy, over.
Jeff: This is Jeff, speak.
Chris: "tsh" How long i gonna wait for this shit?
Jeff: *Sigh* Alright, alright, you can drop it now.

Jeff take out a signal flare and light it up, green smoke coming out from it.

Dreka: Eh...
Jeff: Hmm?
Dreka: Nothing...
Chris: "tsh" Dropping the metal case, be careful.

Helicopter come, drop a large case and fly away.

Jeff: Bon voyage.
Dreka: What is it?
Jeff: Nothing for you.

Two man hiding in the bushes near Jeff, they are bandits.

Jeff: I can smell you, come out of there.
Bandit: Well, you remind me of peacekeeper.
Jeff: Hmm, what are you trying to do, huh? *ready AA-12*
Bandit: Nothing, just die.
Jeff: What?

One of the bandit, say something that Jeff can't understand, he feel something wrong happen about his heart.

Jeff: The fuck!? Argh! My heart!!
Dreka: What happen?
Jeff: What did you do to me!?
Bandit: Wahahaha, even the peacekeeper can't survive. A curse that kill you.
Jeff: Ahh, help me!

Jeff collapse as he grabbing his chest in pain.

Bandit: Dragon mamono, only powerful in dragon form.
Bandit2: Can i do "that" before handing her to mamono hunter?
Bandit: Nah, we not gonna handing her to everyone, this is the second most rare mamono.

......

Jeff: So what the FUCK!!! You said i can take punishment?
Girl: Yes, you did...
Jeff: I just have a heart attack and fucking die, great, now i just wait for "Death" taking me too hell.
Girl: Not yet....

......

Jeff wake up, it is already night, his doesn't feel any pain again. He look at his hand and stand up.

Jeff: No shit? Dreka?

Jeff look around, no one else beside that heavy metal case. It is lock of key code.

Jeff: Alright, 1-6-5-9.

Jeff tap in the number and open the metal case, it is full of weapon.

Jeff: Glad i put a tracker on Dreka just now.

Jeff take a FN scar L(assault rifle) and a LDD(Location Detection Device), he click it open and checking Dreka's location.

*Beep*

Jeff: Gotcha.

*Bandit's hideout*

Bandit: C'mon, i'm not gonna hurt you, just come over here.
Dreka: Ah! Get away from me!
Bandit2: She is the shy one, ahahahaha!

Jeff over hear from outside of the door.

Jeff: *Whisper* Motherfuckers, how dare you touch my Dreka.

Jeff take a deep breath, ready to charge in.

Jeff: On three, one... two... three!

Jeff kick open the door, before the two bandit could act, he shot them in the chest, 4 shot for each man, they fall and bleed.

Bandit: Ah... tell me your name before i die...
Jeff: Hmm, if Eric is the peacekeeper, then i will be Jeff the killing machine, tell these people that i killed in hell.
Dreka: You, you are alive!


Dreka leap to Jeff and hug him.

Jeff: I ain't go down that easy, hehe.
Dreka: Mmm.
Jeff: Oh, by the way, can you carry that thing in dragon form?
Dreka: Ah!!!?

JE end.

Jeff's nickname in army:
1) One man army
2) Solo wolf

Jeff- the killing machine.

Jeff's skill:
Soldier's Adrenaline rush (Similar to Eric's Deadeye, but he can't use it on his free will.)
Raging fire of soldier - Very dangerous, cause he will shoot anything in his field of view, when he scream, TAKE COVER.

Rikko-43 Group: Member - Total Posts: 1179
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Posted on: 06/15/10 09:58PM
EricFong said:
No, he will wait for Jeff, Jeff have all of these equipment, weapon, he need and he won't die unless Eric does.
Why? Eric can endure pain, but does not mean he won't die, once Eric is down, Jeff will die when he take critical attack.

Eric: keeping the world in peace is my duty too, i will see what can i do about Demon lord and help.(I am immune to the succubus charm, i also can do extreme long range with sniper, 2500km)


Well before we go you can all come to the big party in the Red Oni's village we go to after Rockefeller's before we split but one of my characters does die fighting Muxley. But I wont say who.

EricFong Group: Member - Total Posts: 451
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Posted on: 06/15/10 10:47PM
Jeff: Muxley? Well... *reload guns* This monster fellow look fun to shoot.
Dreka: No it is dangerous, i can hold him-
Jeff: Nah, i just want you safe.
Eric: You sure about this?
Jeff: Yes.

Rikko-43 Group: Member - Total Posts: 1179
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Posted on: 06/16/10 12:04AM
Yeah muxley would kill you Eric (if you take him solo), hes copied your skill with firearms (and longshots).

Besides, were nowhere near him...yet, and my group will confront and defeat him...at a cost -_-

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Posted on: 06/16/10 01:08AM
Yeah, Eric is always calm even he is in bad situation, when Jeff get hot blooded, he fight without thinking, that is what make him promote to Captain.
I need to do Jeff's story faster so Jeff can keep up to us.(Oh, and btw, don't think i am MW2 fan, i am more of BFBC2 fan and there won't be UAV :P)

Jeff's Episode: Unfinished Business 4.

Jeff riding on top of Dreka in dragon form and Dreka is carrying the metal case. She is tired while flying and carrying that stuff at same time.

*desert*

Jeff: Okay, you can stop in that village now.
Dreka: *transform* Ah... ha... ha, it is heavy...
Jeff: Oh, c'mon, i believe you can do it.
Chuck: How can i help you, stranger?
Jeff: Hey, long time no see, Chuck.
Chuck: We meet before? (That dragon mamono look familiar)
Jeff: Friend of Eric, the current peacekeeper.
Chuck: Oh you!? Really, long time!
Jeff: Yeah, you knew Celica, right? Where is she?
Chuck: Down there by the street, cloth shop.

Jeff look into the street, he turn to Dreka.

Jeff: Stay here and take care of my stuff. *walk*
Dreka: Yes...
Chuck: *whispering* Come on, go find a place to rest.

Jeff continues walk down to the street, he reach the cloth shop, but it is closed.

Jeff: *Knocks* Lady, are you in there?
Celica: Sorry, i am closed today.
Jeff: Remember me?
Celica: You are?
Jeff: *sigh and take off gas mask* Is me.
Celica: Jeff!? *hug Jeff* I has been waiting for you...
Jeff: And i am looked for you too.

Jeff get in Celica's shop and close the door.

Jeff: Let's do what we didn't finish that time...
Celica: Okay...

Meanwhile, Dreka is eating some food from Chuck.

Chuck: You like it?
Dreka: Hmm, Mmm. *nod*
Chuck: That is in that box?
Dreka: Mmm. *shake head*
Chuck: Okay.

Unfinished Business 4 end.

I still rush, but i think it still readable.

Oh, hope this don't spoil too much, Eric will still die in the end for his daughter.

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